[identity profile] factotum666.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] talkpolitics
hopefully I am not in violation of any of the rules. I have had occasion to ponder freedom, human behavior, stupidity, politics, etc. Among other things I have discovered that I am very unlike most humans. Visit wrongplanet.net to get an idea of this lack of similarity to most of you out there. I have many neurological deficiencies. One that I consider to be a plus is that I do not emote like many of you. The manmager of this area said to refrain from attacking the person, just their ideas. He does not realize that for the vast majority of humans, attacking their ideas / beliefs is the same as attacking them. I do not have this problem. This I have in common with the best of scientists. Scientists are wrong more often than they are right, and there is no appealing the udgment of the physical world / nature.

If someone does not like your ideas, you can go find "like minded people" This is not an option with nature.

Well, a few years ago, I posted 6000 word essay on the internet. In live journal in fact. Enter the two words orwells boot into any search engine and that essay will come back at the top of the list. Number 1. Maybe number 2, and sometimes 1 and 2 depending on the engine. For example both bing and yahoo have me listed 1 and 2. So, I figured that I had something to say. At the risk of sounding a bit arrogant, how many of you will come back at the top of any search?

My conclusion was kind of a downer. But the response and my own curiousity drove me to expand on my ideas, and they can be found here: http://xfoolnature.org/?p=10. This is a 35000 word article and growing. Figure on spending the better part of an 2 hours reading it, and that is without the links. You may find it worth while, since I think I have some ideas about addressing most of the problems we face from the physical world, and how to reduce the chances of being the victim of psychopaths.

I very much want to get constructive feedback. I believe that I have some new and constructive ideas to add to human discourse. At least they are ideas that I have not seen anywhere else.

Thanks in advance for your input.

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 03:25 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pastorlenny.livejournal.com
I sure wish I was smart.

(no subject)

Date: 14/8/12 11:59 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eracerhead.livejournal.com
I like toast

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 03:56 (UTC)

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 05:02 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kylinrouge.livejournal.com
I think once you get to 35,000 words it's no longer an 'article', it's the whole thing.

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 05:42 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] peristaltor.livejournal.com
I'm told the key to uniqueness is to insert a single word into Google and come up with exactly one reference. Perhaps you should work on that.

At one time it worked for "calipigious," but that got pretty mainstream in a hurry.

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 06:18 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] abomvubuso.livejournal.com
While this sure is intriguing, I'll cite two of our most basic rules:

6. Posts that solely include an advertisement of either a LJ community, a personal LJ blog or a commercial product will be removed. Mentioning these as part of the narrative is fine though, as long as that's not the sole purpose of the post. Same applies to campaigning for a cause, or non-political topics.

8. We strongly encourage personal opinion and analysis, rather than posting a one-line comment/question, a single link, or picture, copy-pasting some article or embedding a Youtube video. This is generally considered low-quality and would in most cases be removed. Don't be so lazy, we're interested in your personal position!

Bottom-line: in order to begin having something like a discussion here, you'll need to either put a short opinion in your post, or at least present (in very rough lines) what your essay/article is about. So far what I can gather from your post is: "Hi. I'm not like most of you. I'm unique. I once wrote an essay. People liked it. It's number 1 in the search engine. Here's a link to my essay. I hope you like it".

It sounds interesting, but I'm afraid that doesn't suffice. For the two reasons cited above.

Now, usually we give 1 hour for amendments, but because my comment possibly comes at a very inconvenient time for you, feel free to use the next 6 hours to either 1) add some opinion on the subject you want discussed, or 2) summarise shortly what your essay is about.

Then, hopefully, we proceed with the discussion.

Meanwhile, putting the post in the [pending for deletion] tag ;)

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 06:40 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ddstory.livejournal.com
So you're inviting us to read a mysterious 35000 word article that could eventually turn out to be a list of cooking recipes? Or a phone book?

How do I know that you're not inviting me to click on a link that would install malicious software on my engine?

What is it about? What does it say? What are the points it's making? I'm not going to dedicate hours upon hours of my time to read something that I'm not sure what it is at all, and only then have a discussion about it, probably, maybe. It doesn't work that way. That's not the idea of this forum. Besides, there are books to fill my time with.

Tell me honestly. Were you just trawling for a few more hundred clicks on your article? Did you cross-post this to a dozen other communities, hoping for even more clicks that would prop up your article on the search engines? Or did you intend to have a real debate here? Because if the latter was your intention, you didn't provide any fodder for debate.
Edited Date: 13/8/12 06:43 (UTC)

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] ddstory.livejournal.com - Date: 13/8/12 07:32 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] dwer.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 05:54 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] dwer.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 21:22 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] yes-justice.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 19:00 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] ddstory.livejournal.com - Date: 13/8/12 10:01 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] luzribeiro.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 08:44 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] luzribeiro.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 09:54 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] dwer.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 21:24 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 07:46 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] abomvubuso.livejournal.com
The personal stuff I'd rather not address here. While I meant for you to put your amendment in the original post itself, I say let's not be too dense and count that what you presented more than suffices. After all, the idea was to see here what your position on the issue was (of course, supported with facts and evidence if possible, like you said). And we did. So thank you. Enjoy the discussion! :)

Removing the 6-hour deadline now. *tips hat*

I'll visit your sites, yes.
Edited Date: 13/8/12 07:47 (UTC)

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] abomvubuso.livejournal.com - Date: 13/8/12 07:56 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] yes-justice.livejournal.com - Date: 13/8/12 16:46 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] luzribeiro.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 08:42 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] luzribeiro.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 09:51 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] yes-justice.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 19:04 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 08:05 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] htpcl.livejournal.com
Hey, that's quite some read!

Might need a few pints to wash it down.

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 10:02 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luzribeiro.livejournal.com
OK I'll click on it. Maybe later today, or some time by the end of this week. Or the next one. Bye for now.

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 10:29 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-rukh.livejournal.com
Have you tried taking up painting?

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 10:37 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luzribeiro.livejournal.com
Maybe a canvas that is 35,000,000 pixels.

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 11:33 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oportet.livejournal.com
If you google my name, I'm the 48th result to come up.

So yeah, I'll waive the autograph fee for all of you.

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 12:47 (UTC)

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 13:35 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] root-fu.livejournal.com
refrain from attacking the person, just their ideas. He does not realize that for the vast majority of humans, attacking their ideas / beliefs is the same as attacking them

Good point.

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 16:44 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yes-justice.livejournal.com
I am very unlike most humans

Not an unusual feeling. I'm betting the similarities outweigh the differences.


Visit wrongplanet.net to get an idea of this lack of similarity to most of you out there.

No.


(no subject)

From: [identity profile] luzribeiro.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 08:40 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] htpcl.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 08:57 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] luzribeiro.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 17:50 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] htpcl.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 18:25 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] yes-justice.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 18:53 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] htpcl.livejournal.com - Date: 15/8/12 06:29 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] yes-justice.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 10:42 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] auntiesiannan.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 11:21 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] yes-justice.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 18:51 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] auntiesiannan.livejournal.com - Date: 15/8/12 02:28 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] yes-justice.livejournal.com - Date: 15/8/12 03:20 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] dwer.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 21:47 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 19:59 (UTC)

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 22:08 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslnger.livejournal.com
Having not had time to read your book yet, I would suggest that you look into Spiral Dynamics. If you need pointers on that, ask me.

(no subject)

Date: 13/8/12 23:49 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-rukh.livejournal.com

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spiral_Dynamics


Sounds like a cult.

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] kylinrouge.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 03:38 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] gunslnger.livejournal.com - Date: 16/8/12 10:51 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] the-rukh.livejournal.com - Date: 16/8/12 23:27 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

Date: 14/8/12 03:13 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geezer-also.livejournal.com
Sorry, I'm going to have to pass, the 666 in your user name scared me off.

(no subject)

Date: 14/8/12 07:04 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mahnmut.livejournal.com
And that's not even the real number of the beast.

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] yes-justice.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 19:06 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] mahnmut.livejournal.com - Date: 14/8/12 19:12 (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

Date: 14/8/12 09:06 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tcpip.livejournal.com
Having skimmed the article, I will offer the following advice: if you want your ideas to be treated seriously, write in a serious style.

(no subject)

Date: 14/8/12 11:39 (UTC)

(no subject)

Date: 14/8/12 12:13 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eracerhead.livejournal.com
Alright, I only skimmed your article because of a few things. The major one being structure: it's rambling style isn't easy to read. Also using terms like "stoopid" makes you look that way. It may mean something to you but I couldn't understand why you were using it. Restructure with an abstract on top (read some scientific papers for that), then treat the rest like a news article: Cover the main points in brief at the beginning and flesh out the ideas later on. That way if a reader is interested in a particular point they can read on, otherwise they can skip it.

If you are actually writing a book, then the style would be different, but nobody has time to read every book ever published, so they need a good reason to devote hours to it. This requires pre- and post- publication publicity.

FYI Like Andy Warhol I claim my IQ to be 86. That number isn't arbitrary. Being smart does not shield you from dumb ideas. In fact, in some ways it makes it more likely that you will have them.

Credits & Style Info

Talk Politics.

A place to discuss politics without egomaniacal mods

DAILY QUOTE:
"Humans are the second-largest killer of humans (after mosquitoes), and we continue to discover new ways to do it."

January 2026

M T W T F S S
    12 34
5 678 91011
12131415161718
19202122232425
262728293031