That's better -- but still needs analysis to see how the revisions plays with the rest of the bill's language and an explanation as to how the law is even remotely necessary if the ONLY time cops will check documents is now when they are doing things where they already take i.d. from a suspected criminal. That would be fairly silly and leaves major suspicion of the law still up in the air.

Oh, and GREAT source -- not one quote from a critic of the bill on the implications of the "fix" but lots of quotes from people saying fixing major language flaws in the law is just "tinkering" so liberals will shut up. That's some bang up reportng there.